FACILITY SEVEN #1
Words By
Noeland Collins
Copyright 2000
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Wide
shot of an iguana, perched on a rock, in the middle of the desert. Basking in
the sun.
CAPTION- “You’re looking at a door."
CAPTION-
"A secret door.”
CAPTION- "Hidden in a place unfriendly to
man."
Establishing shot of a large control room. Banks of computers, and
monitors, and workstations, with a controller at each. The walls around them
are littered with monitors, and the only light in the room seems to come from
these monitors.
In a
dark corner we find him. “FATHER” sits quietly, watching with no emotion, he’s
gaunt, wiry muscle, with several wires hooked into his head, then reaching up
into the darkness. His mouth is sown shut, and there is a bar code on his forehead,
just above his nose. (Think Iggy Pop)
CAPTION- “This is the place where that door leads.
Takamori’s Facility7. A bio weapons
lab buried deep within the earth. 136 levels, 85 of which are closed to human
traffic. For very good reason.”
CAPTION- “This is a world unto itself, the workers
do not leave, they have signed themselves away from the sun, and they have
given this place a simple name.”
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Close up
of a controller at a workstation, glancing to his left, his expression is
unhappy.
CAPTION- “Hell.”
Angle on
FATHER, sitting in his “thrown”, wires from his skull reaching into darkness,
keypads and monitors at his fingertips, and haunting lights all around him.
CAPTION- “Father RUNS facility7, every aspect, every
THING is instantly sent to him, he processes the data, and responds in kind
with further instructions, orders, threats, or no response at all, depending on
the situation.”
Close up
on his arm, and hand, as he types something into a keypad. There is an IV
leading into his arm, and his fingernails are dried and cracked.
CAPTION- “It all takes milliseconds for orders, and
instructions to run these wires, these veins. It’s been this way for years
now.”
CAPTION- “However . . ..”
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Close up
of a number, stenciled on a wall. 130, with smaller letters beneath it. PROCEDE
NO FURTHER.
CAPTION- “Things change.”
Shot of
a large creature, strapped to an examining wall. The creature is all teeth and
hate, with large claws, and many tentacles, all of which are locked down.
There is
an AUTODOC poking and prodding it with it’s own mechanical tentacles. These are
hovering droids, with several “arms” that have different instruments attached
to the end of them. They are horrific in their own right.
Close up
of the creature’s face, pulling away from a LARGE needle.
CAPTION- “Genetically engineered monsters are
examined, and evaluated by mechanical monsters, then sent to off world colonies
for war, sport, and other endeavors.
Close
up, the needle is BURIED into the creature’s neck, and he HOWLS in pain.
Close up
on a certain restraint, there is a slight crack in it. There is blood running
down the wall in thin beads. The
creature is straining his wrist under the restraint.
CAPTION- “Sometimes, something as simple as a single
loose screw can change the world.”
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The
creatures arm is BUSTING FREE, slamming into the AutoDoc.
The
Autodoc is SLAMMING into a wall, arms breaking off, flying free, flying into
the air.
The
creature CATCHES one of the arms, a cutting instrument
Close up
of FATHER, he looks a bit startled.
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Angle on
a corridor. Security droids are piling out of a door. These droids are
basically hovering weapons, with a large cannon on each side, and hidden
weapons inside.
CAPTION- “This isn’t the first time a weapon has
gotten the best of an AutoDoc.”
The
creature is free, he’s severed some of his tentacles, and there is blood all
over the wall.
Close up
on one of the tentacle, it grows back instantly.
The door
opens before him, and two security droids are there.
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The
creature is using the wreckage of the Autodoc to SMASH one droid into the
other.
CAPTION- “This IS the first time anything has gotten
the best of a security droid.”
Close up
of FATHER, a single bead of sweat runs down his face.
CAPTION- “Father is scared, a human emotion he
hasn’t felt in a VERY long time. Panic begins to well up in his throat.”
The
creature moving for the door.
It slams
shut, and CLICKS – locked.
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The
creature HITS the door, full on, and puts a huge dent in it.
Angle
from outside the door, another huge dent is put into it.
The door
FLIES off the hinges, slamming into the other side of the corridor.
Close up
of a security droid, his cannons FIRING.
The
creature is running down the dark corridor, as a HUGE hole is blown in the wall
near him, and a few tentacles are blown off.
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Father
is typing away on both keyboards.
Close up on a single controller, looking
curiously at Father. He's a skinny geek, but he has sharp, strong eyes.
CAPTION- "This is Walter 215. No other name, he
was born into this world, and raised
to be a controller. A high honor in HELL."
Father locks
eyes with him, angry.
Walter
recoils back to his keyboard.
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Full
page shot of a locker / equipment room, with armor, and weapons all over the
walls. Six individuals are cinching up belts, strapping on weapons, and locking
armor into place.
Three of
them are women, but they are warriors, make no mistake. Ages vary.
CAPTION- "Free thinkers, soldiers trained to
move quickly with strategy, and willpower. Things the Droids can be programmed
with, but never fully realize."
CAPTION- "Known as The Militia, they are
soldiers in a never ending state of readiness. This unit has dealt with this
situation before, they've destroyed hundreds of thousands of genetic
monsters."
CAPTION- "They have trained, and trained for
this situation, some their entire lives, but only two have ever seen it for real, not the training monsters in
controlled situations."
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Several
shots of weapons being loaded, and armor being clamped down. Lots of cool sound
FX. Some of the armor has words, and sentences scrawled on it, stuff like an 8
ball, KILL, and ONLY THE STRONG. (By no means do you have to use those two, you
get the idea though?)
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Close up
on a brute of a scarred, bitter, aging warrior. His eyes burn with cold
experience as he slides on a techno gauntlet. His face is heavily scarred.
CAPTION- "Known simply as 'WALL', he was raised
on facility4, location- the moon. He's killed some of the most dangerous
weapons we've ever created."
Close up
of a woman with the build of an Austrian weight lifter, and the face of an
angel. She's holding a huge weapon, belt fed.
CAPTION- "MEGGAN6254. The heavy weapons
officer. She's only 18 years old. She's been in training for this very moment
for ten of them."
Close up
of a young man, an arrogant smile on his lips. He's almost as pretty as Megan
is. He's packing a massive weapon.
CAPTION- "SAMUEL4355. Explosives, medical, and
bioweapon anatomy. He's the medic for the group, and also the one designated to
study the creatures created here. He knows them all, inside and out. "
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Close up
of an older black man. He's checking the chamber on a weapon.
CAPTION- "ROBERT789. A soldier, no specific
training. He kills what they tell him to."
Angle on
a smaller, but stern looking female. She's sliding rounds into a clip.
CAPTION- "LAURIE3326. She's mostly a grunt, a
swift, and precise killer, she is also the sniper among this unit."
Mid-
close up on the last member, she's a rough looking gal with a scar across her
nose. Holding a high tech pistol in each hand. She's a bit older as well.
CAPTION- "WENDY356. The other true combat
veteran, she's a calm, cold killer. Genetically engineered for combat, Wendy is
a machine."
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Close up
of a hand being held up, a bar code on it's palm. It's a skinny hand.
Close up
on a small monitor. It reads – " Walter215 shift over. Two hours of free
time then return to quarters for sleep. "
Walter
takes a glance over his shoulder.
Father is
looking a bit frazzled, this has to be very subtle.
CAPTION- "Walter is the only controller to look
at Father. The others know he's there, but choose to never look AT him. It's
fear, but Walter isn't afraid, he's watching."
Close up
of Walter, he has a smirk on his face.
CAPTION- "As a result, Walter is the only one
to notice that something is wrong."
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Shot of
the creature, ripping a console off the wall, sparks, and electricity flash and
fly all around him.
Two
droids near him BLOW UP.
Close up
of Father, his eyes are wide, sort of a moment of horror.
The
creature is mostly shadow as it walks down a now dark corridor, filling with
smoke. It's holding a large pipe in its hand, it's tentacles up all around him.
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Angle on
a large door, three security droids are before it, the door reads, simply, DO
NOT ENTER.
Shot of
the creature, just around the corner of the door, we see it sort of hiding,
with the door, and the droids in the background. (That make sense?)
Close up
on a droid, the pipe the creature was holding is PLUNGING (as if thrown) into
it, sparks, and electricity shoot from the wound.
The
other two droids open up with tons of firepower.
The
creature ducking down, the tentacles wrapping around him, he is enveloped in
fire.
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WALL,
and his unit are walking down a corridor, like the hand of God, all attitude,
and weapons. Wall is in front, a serious looking assault rifle strapped across
his chest.
Their
armor covers most of their bodies, save their heads, which are exposed for now.
They
pile into an elevator, and Wall brings a finger to his earpiece.
The
doors close, and the elevator starts down automatically. (Maybe illustrated
this with a series of smaller panels showing the level numbers, JUST A
SUGGESTION)
Wall is
speaking out loud now.
WALL- All right, a sit rep! A single weapon is
loose, and is making his way to the holding pens. No toxins, or poisons in the
environment. This weapon has had no problem with wading through our droids.
Were in full gear, explosives are authorized, and shoot to kill. You know your
nasties, mind your lessons."
Close up
of Samuel.
SAMUEL- If it gets any other weapons free down
there, we could have a major cluster fuck.
Angle on
Wall, giving Samuel a sideways glance.
WALL- Other units are prepping, and standing by,
they'll deploy as Father deems necessary. This weapon is a breather, level 5,
no projectile capabilities, we WILL contain it, or destroy it.
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Walter
is sitting in his quarters. Very small, very cluttered and lived in. It's mostly dark, and Walter is typing on a
make shift keyboard, and staring at a very small screen, he's smiling like the
devil. His face lit by the monitor.
Angle on
the rigged computer. Wires, and cables run from the monitor, to the keyboard,
then into a unit on the wall marked "Food Dispenser" (looking for a
cluttered feel here, and maybe LOTS of wires running form the wall)
CAPTION- "Walter has a rebellious streak. This
computer is very, very unauthorized. But Walter doesn't care, he's got plans."
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The unit
standing ready inside the elevator, heads still exposed.
WALL- Activate headgear.
Panel is
a word. the familiar sound of an elevator door opening. DING.
Angle
from outside the elevator, the doors are open, and the Unit is fanned out a
bit, weapons ready, in our face. Smoke is rolling around them dramatically.
Wall is in front, identified, as they all are by a name hand written across the
front of their helmets.
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Angle on
the corridor, dark, smoky.
Same
angle, a shape is there now. A shadow really, but obviously not the same
creature we saw before.
Close up
on Wall.
WALL- FIRE!
All the
units OPEN FIRE!
The
shape in the hall is cut to pieces. Chunks, and fluid spray everywhere, the
walls around him are pelted with bullet holes.
The
creature looks NOTHING like the weapon we saw earlier.
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Robert
looks up.
Angle on
the ceiling, it's full of small creatures, almost CUTE clinging there, ready to
drop.
Robert
brings up his weapon, and opens fire.
The
creatures drop on them, and Samuel is knocked down.
Wall
grabs the creature, and pulls it off his armor.
Close up
of his hand, crushing the creatures mid section. Making quite a mess.
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Close up
on a creature, it's face is a mess of hair, with beady eyes, a dot for a pupil.
Pan out,
the creature has it's "hands" raised up, but they are really weapons,
organic missile launchers. (Do whatever ya want with the body and such.)
Angle on
two security droids rounding a corner.
The
creature opens fire.
There is
a massive explosion.
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Bigger
panel. The unit is silhouetted in the light of a massive explosion, bursting
through a wall to their side.
Samuel
is hit, FULL ON by a chunk of the wall.
Wall
opens fire with two very large pistols. Robert is right beside him, using his
rifle.
Angle of
the creature, it seems to be smiling. The bullets have little effect on him,
even though they are going right through him.
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The
creature DIVES at the unit.
Wall is
there to grapple with the creature. He's yelling under his helmet.
WALL- MOVE OUT!! SECURE THE CORRIDOR!!!
Shot of
the corridor, the rest of the unit is moving away as Wall fights the creature
in the distance.
Close up
of Wall's chest plate as the creature punctures it with his claws.
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Profile
shot as the chest plate is RIPPED off, and flung away in a single motion.
Wall
brings up his rifle, and OPENS FIRE.
The
concussion of the point blank automatic fire knocks the creature back.
Wall is
running down the corridor now. The creatures hot on his tail.
TO BE CONTINUED . . . . .